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Submitted: August 1, 2009
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Make:OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model:E-520
Shutter Speed:1/160 second
Aperture:F/5.0
Focal Length:30 mm
ISO Speed:400
Date Taken:Jul 14, 2009, 5:44:02 PM

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Photography / People & Portraits / Spontaneous Portraits

modelka: daga
model: dominik
makeup: magdalena

Critique by `suzi9mm Aug 1, 2009, 6:44:10 AM

this caught my eye with the interesting positioning and color. i think the models and how they are posed makes it interesting and i am curious as the viewer. however i am left uncertain what emotions or feelings this could or should evoke. i am not sure what the image suggests, if anything?

technically, i thin he is perhaps overtly blurry, just a tiny bit more detail to show his expression would be interesting for me. and her expression im not sure of, is it satisfaction?

her face is "photoshopped to hell" if you pardon my language. smoothing and softening are needed of course for a flawless mag cover type of finsh but i think this may have gone just a bit too far, there is nothing real left on the skin. it looks fake compared to the rest of the photo. make up is gorgeous though, of course, my greetings to the artist

so while really original and a great attempt, i think this leaves me a bit cold, id like to see more emotion that could be brought in by showing more of their pose or something on their faces. and id go easier with photoshop, this looks like they might be 2 diff photos, i.e. photomanip.

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